Thursday, April 11, 2013

Show not Tell

Telling:

Tuk-tuks are a fast way to get around in town because they are small. These rides are cool and exciting.


Showing:

I could feel the cool wind on my face and through my hair as the Tuk-tuk cruised along the street. Honk! Hawkers sounded their horns so that you would look at the flowers they were selling. The sweet fragrance of the rainbow coloured flowers filled the air. The ride was almost perfect.

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